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Have you ever felt
     Like there's something
          Taking over you?
                                             Another essessence of you.

Like there's another
     person inside of you
          just waiting to escape.
                                              To come out and play.

I felt it
     I felt her
         Poison is her name.
                                               A name I fear.

She's always been there
     Inside me
          But now she's free
                Causing trouble and pain
                                               She's a sin to my heart and soul.

She's opened my eyes
     But closed doors on oppurunities
          She's gained new respects
                  But lost old ones.
                                                What has happened to me? Olivia?

I'm losing everything
     But gaining more
          Thanks to her.
                                                  Do I even have a name anymore?

What has happened
     To Olivia
           Is she even here anymore?
                                                 She's fading...

The sense of hatred
     of fear and anxioty
         and of the worst of all
                   The feeling of lust.
                                                  But she's holding on.

A hint of sin
    fills her eyes
          and glows a horrid figure
                                                   Trying to stay intact.

The poison taking over
                                                   But not fully in control...
©2007-2009 ~crazyplatypus
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Olivia... Don't let her take over...

I have one inside me... one who attempts to steal my name and destroy everyone I love and myself. He's the one who sought to kill everyone who had turned on me, then convince me my loved ones had turned on me and kill them, then myself... But you stopped him... You showed me who I really was... I owe you the same favor. I will destroy your poison any way I can. How may I help?

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Giving up my hopes and dreams... I'm a lost cause...
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wowza... owo This is a pretty poem, and kinda sad... But I don't see you doing anything bad or anything owo I hope everything's going okay with you D:

I have a bobblehead inside me. You've met Toddleman, haven't you? owo

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Kristoph: I wouldn't want you to let him down... If you get my drift.
Apollo: Drift gotten, sir! I-I'm all over that drift!

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:iconcrazyplatypus:
It seems like everyone has a person inside them huh?
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Ah yes...the dark and dirty little secrets we try to hold inside. We all have them, every single one of us. A force deep inside of us that just eventually will worm itself out every once in a while, pertaining to one or more of the seven deadly sins. Hm, that's just my theory. Trust me...as you and I both know, these people we try to keep locked inside are very dangerous, you and I both know; Poison is a very dangerous person.

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~SionKitsune:heart:*GemTheFennec.

Protect those close
:iconcrazyplatypus:
Yes, and as much as I hold her in, somehow she still escapes and destroys my life...slowly...day by day, person by person
:iconhammie-head:
Ayup. Toddle's my inner child.

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Kristoph: I wouldn't want you to let him down... If you get my drift.
Apollo: Drift gotten, sir! I-I'm all over that drift!

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:iconcrazyplatypus:
well Poison is not an inner child
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Well, Toddleman's not a child, either.
He's a Bobblehead.

Well... I'm gonna have to say Fuzz is my inner child... Toddle is his inner child.

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Kristoph: I wouldn't want you to let him down... If you get my drift.
Apollo: Drift gotten, sir! I-I'm all over that drift!

blahh advertising a roleplay forum [link] yay
:iconcrazyplatypus:
well either way, what I speak of is not good

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